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Unhappily Ever After

And so it finally came to be,
I hoped this day would never emerge,
but "Hope" can only do so much,
as I discover it was inevitable.

All is lost, all is gone;
I could never feel more miserable,
sitting alone in the dark,
with no one by my side...

Unrightful enemies still there,
laughing at my expense,
they believe I have no heart,
but I do - it's now in pieces.

I've napped several times already,
trying to sleep over the pain,
but dreaming is temporary relief,
before I reawake into the world of hate...

I'm back down to square zero,
with very little spirit left in me,
who knows if I were destined to be lonely,
I could live unhappily ever after...
Still feeling bummed out about what happened the other day =( I couldn't help but actually write poetry in attempt to express how I feel about everything right now... it's sad, I know.....
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IrishSpy33 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Brought a tear to my eye!
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HyperTails0110 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2005
I like the words, the'yre suitable to tie together.

But ugh. Acting depressed in public is just a way of begging for attention, grow up.
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hellwithin8024 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2005
Great poem! ;P
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bled-for-you Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2005   Writer
awe..this is so good, I love the part were it goes
they believe I have no heart,
but I do - it's now in pieces.

I think that it went so well..Sorry you're so sad:-\ But..good poetry usually comes from the minds strongest feelings, saddness seems to dominate with most people though
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MeleeKirby Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2005
Thank you... I'm glad you believe that this is a fine piece of poetry, for I have not really written much before. Perhaps it's a hidden talent I did not realize I had...

Feel free to read and review my other recent pieces of poetry, I would greatly appreciate it.
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bled-for-you Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2005   Writer
awe, well, you seem very natural at it. I will see about checking out your other stuff:)
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MeleeKirby Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2005
Thanks. All the poetry I have done so far are in my recent deviations list, so you dont have to browse my vast gallery to see all I have written so far...
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Kamasakai Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005
>>' I know, everything sucks in this ludicrus world. I'd be far better off if I was some being trapped in the internet and existing for all time. The Ultimate AI.

Enough fantasies of computerized nonsense now.

I'm depressed 24/7, though I never show it anymore. I just learn to live with it and just hope for the best, though hoping doesnt do crap. You should try it one time. Worked with me when my dad went suicide, you know. It still haunts me right now.

Anyways, best wishes, happy hunting, and I'll draw you a Gift Art tomarrow.

(That was a rare darker side of Kam that you will (hopefully) never see on the face of the earth ever again.)

Sayonara, Melee.
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rockstardemon Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005
A POEM!! from you!? but still its greatly written and dark and depressing like your SSSOOOUUUULLL
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DeviantWritersUnion Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
A well done peice.
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MeleeKirby Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
Thank you =)
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DeviantWritersUnion Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
You might consider joing the Group, Writing is so hard to get across on DA now adays compaired to all the Picture peices being done. If you'd like send me a Note. I'll get you singed ASAP
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MeleeKirby Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
Well, as insinuated in my preview picture, I haven't really been "into" poetry all that much.. this is the first time I wrote one, inspired through emotional pain. I made a second piece of poetry not too long ago if you wish to review it and let me know what you think.
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aquakirbyyoshi Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
Hmmm it's depressing... I like that stuff.
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Safalo Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
Sad :(

:hug:
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KatTheFoxtaur Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can tell that came from the heart. As I've said many times before, I can only pray that you feel better soon. :hug: You won't be depressed forever (unless you have that chemical imbalance in which case you should take Zoloft but that's not the point)

I know you can get through it. It's only a matter of time.
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SnowTigerCub Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
I took Zoloft. I was the gueniea pig for the psychiatric (sp) centre and they fucked up my mind. First, one 50 mg pill, THEN, a 100 mg pill, THEN TWO FRICKIN 100MG PILLS OF THAT ZOLOFT.


*pant pant*


.....

seriously


:heart:
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KatTheFoxtaur Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
._O That sucks. I can tell from your icon it f5kd up your mind! XD *is shot*
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SnowTigerCub Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
Hahhaha exactly.



:heart:
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Striderknight Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
...

Again, you fail to heed your own dear friends' words. Wake up and listen to them. They got a point.
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Draconya Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: tight, hpe you feel netter soon
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Ziggy161 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
I don't usually like depressing poems, but this one is good. Despite saying that, Melee, I know you won't be alone forever! You're too nice a person ^_^ Just take time to think about this, then you can move on. You can do it!
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Dagg Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
Dang man, that was deep.
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Yoshi-Rocker Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
This happen...but this is how it is.....
Many alreayd know of how it feel.....so your not the only one...
Your speaking to one of them....(me.)
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KirbySonicKrazy Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005   Digital Artist
How depressing.... :o

And with these depressing poems I always like to give a ... repressing... comment:

You're awesome no matter what people say/do to you, you'll always be loved, believe it.
OR ELSE! :lol:
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electricyoshi Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
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awww...poor MK... The poem is great art wise. Straight from the soul. I think you'll be happier once you move on... I know it will be hard, but thats one of the many obstacles in life! I think ya can do it....
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Toshi21 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
:hug: This has a powerful meaning JB...i hope you get better soon
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MeleeKirby Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
Thanks...
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Project-Zero Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
:salute: that is an excelant poem.

i'm sorry to hear about what happend.
i hope all shall be well once again.
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white-yoshi Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005  Student Filmographer
:hug:
Melee, please forget about what happened. You were quite happy before you had a girlfriend-so be happy now. ^_^
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Striderknight Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
Mm, I hate to burst your bubble, but when I met him, he was single and he was still depressed.
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