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Unhappily Ever After

And so it finally came to be,
I hoped this day would never emerge,
but "Hope" can only do so much,
as I discover it was inevitable.

All is lost, all is gone;
I could never feel more miserable,
sitting alone in the dark,
with no one by my side...

Unrightful enemies still there,
laughing at my expense,
they believe I have no heart,
but I do - it's now in pieces.

I've napped several times already,
trying to sleep over the pain,
but dreaming is temporary relief,
before I reawake into the world of hate...

I'm back down to square zero,
with very little spirit left in me,
who knows if I were destined to be lonely,
I could live unhappily ever after...
Still feeling bummed out about what happened the other day =( I couldn't help but actually write poetry in attempt to express how I feel about everything right now... it's sad, I know.....
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IrishSpy33 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Brought a tear to my eye!
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HyperTails0110 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2005
I like the words, the'yre suitable to tie together.

But ugh. Acting depressed in public is just a way of begging for attention, grow up.
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hellwithin8024 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2005
Great poem! ;P
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bled-for-you Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2005   Writer
awe..this is so good, I love the part were it goes
they believe I have no heart,
but I do - it's now in pieces.

I think that it went so well..Sorry you're so sad:-\ But..good poetry usually comes from the minds strongest feelings, saddness seems to dominate with most people though
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MeleeKirby Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2005
Thank you... I'm glad you believe that this is a fine piece of poetry, for I have not really written much before. Perhaps it's a hidden talent I did not realize I had...

Feel free to read and review my other recent pieces of poetry, I would greatly appreciate it.
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bled-for-you Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2005   Writer
awe, well, you seem very natural at it. I will see about checking out your other stuff:)
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MeleeKirby Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2005
Thanks. All the poetry I have done so far are in my recent deviations list, so you dont have to browse my vast gallery to see all I have written so far...
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Kamasakai Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005
>>' I know, everything sucks in this ludicrus world. I'd be far better off if I was some being trapped in the internet and existing for all time. The Ultimate AI.

Enough fantasies of computerized nonsense now.

I'm depressed 24/7, though I never show it anymore. I just learn to live with it and just hope for the best, though hoping doesnt do crap. You should try it one time. Worked with me when my dad went suicide, you know. It still haunts me right now.

Anyways, best wishes, happy hunting, and I'll draw you a Gift Art tomarrow.

(That was a rare darker side of Kam that you will (hopefully) never see on the face of the earth ever again.)

Sayonara, Melee.
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rockstardemon Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005
A POEM!! from you!? but still its greatly written and dark and depressing like your SSSOOOUUUULLL
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DeviantWritersUnion Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
A well done peice.
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